Essay Writing

Analogies in College Essay Writing: Finding Your Voice

College admissions essays are an opportunity for applicants to showcase their unique personalities and stand out from the crowd. While there are many different approaches that students can take, one of the most powerful and relatable techniques that a student might try is the use of analogies. Analogies are comparisons between two things that are seemingly unrelated but share a commonality.

Analogies are particularly effective in college essays because they help to simplify complex ideas and make them more relatable to the reader. They can also bring a sense of humor and lightheartedness to an otherwise serious and formal piece of writing (remember, admissions officers can read hundreds of personal statements per week, you want yours to stand out!), and can help to add a touch of personality to an essay.

One great example of the power of analogies in college essays comes from

How to Write an A+ Essay (5 Easy Steps!)

Essay writing can be a daunting task on top of your extracurriculars and personal life. You will need to write 5, 10, or even 20+ page papers in high school and college. This article will prepare you to write a quality essay, while being as efficient as possible. 

1. Give yourself enough time. 

First, we must address time management. You cannot routinely score high marks on your essays if you start the night before. You might do well at first, but this habit will catch up to you sooner rather than later. A good rule of thumb is to give yourself at least one week per 1,000 words. Following this strategy, you would write 150 words each day for a week to complete a 1,000 word essay— far more manageable than cranking it out the night before it’s due. Planning ahead will also give you more time to proofread at the end. 

2. Ask better research questions. 

Let’s say that you wanted to research Japanese nationalism after World War II. The first is an example of a weak research question, whereas the second is stronger

What were the causes and effects of Japanese nationalism in the post-WWII era?

How did the Tokyo Trials affect the influence of Japanese nationalism post-WWII? 

There are two components that make the second research question stronger. First, it begins with how instead of what. Questions that begin with what can be readily answered through Wikipedia, or general secondary source material. On the other hand, how questions encourage you to analyze your research, and construct a thesis statement. An essay should go beyond providing information, and articulate a defensible argument. Furthermore, the second question specifically asks how the Tokyo Trials affected Japanese nationalism, instead of being overly general.

3. Create a “skeleton,” and then fill in the details. 

Once you have completed your research, you should create an essay “skeleton,” or outline. This can be tedious, but it will make the process of writing more efficient. If you write without an outline, you will experience writer’s block often. You should outline your introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. I recommend using the PIE template for each body paragraph, or:

Point - An assertion that you are trying to prove
Illustration - Quotations, statistics, and evidence that support the point 
Explanation - Analysis of your illustration, and how it proves the point

After making a comprehensive outline, you’ve done most of the leg work for your essay. At this point, you should only need to make your outlined paragraphs more cohesive by adding in transition words and topic sentences. 

4. Make your thesis and body paragraphs relational. 

Some students will make their thesis statement a list, and have each of their body paragraphs explain isolated components. For example, a poor thesis might assert, “Insufficient punishment from the Tokyo Trials, the exoneration of Hirohito, and revisionist history in textbooks caused Japanese nationalism to persist after World War II.” This thesis is uncomplex, and just lists different aspects of your argument. Instead, you want to make sure that your thesis and body paragraphs are relational, so that your essay is cohesive and sophisticated. A better thesis might state, “The Tokyo Trials insufficiently punished Japan by exonerating Hirohito, which allowed for nationalism to persist in Japanese textbooks and public consciousness.” In this thesis, there are clearer relationships between concepts that can be further explored in your body paragraphs. 

5. Proofread Effectively.

After you have expressed all of your ideas into words, you should begin proofreading. Physically print out your essay, and carefully read it aloud. This technique encourages you to take your time, and makes errors seem readily apparent. Then, have a peer or teacher proofread, if possible. Once you are satisfied with your work, hit submit. Congratulations on a job well done!

Writing is an inherently difficult process that requires both time and discipline. Even seasoned college professors continually draft and revise before publishing new material. However, implementing these 5 steps will streamline the writing process, and save you hours of painstaking work. Give this a try on your next essay, and see how much easier it can be.

College Essay Inspiration, The NYT 2018 Edition

Need inspiration for your college essay? Want to see some recent exemplars? Each of these eloquently reveals family upbringing, values, experiences and inner transformations that bring each of these applicants to life and make them memorable, likable, knowable. #collegeessaygoals 

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How to Write a Better "Why this School" Essay

How to Write a Better "Why this School" Essay

The purpose of the "Why this School" essay (a staple supplemental essay for many US colleges) is to convince the admissions officers at your dream school that it really is your dream school and you belong there! They need to know it wasn't just your counselor who added their school to your list, and you have actually REALLY done your research and know beyond a doubt you and the school are a match made in heaven.